The first tour I watched, was Feri's. It was very interesting and entertaining. Before I wathced her tour, she mentioned some things she did at the summer, bu when I saw the tour, I could imagine perfectly all of her summer vacation. It was pretty awesome. It was very interesting to see the places she visited. It seems like her tour, was very fun, she went to Boston. She had many places, which made the tour long but entertaining, she had many details that make the one whose watching it very fun. What Feris could have done better, is to try to make the tour, go a bit more slow. In some parts, you couldn't appreciate it well, because it was too fast.
The second tour I saw was Adri's. I really liked her tour, because she had the exact places
were she spent most of her summer. For example her house, which i know it quite well, so I could exactly know when I was watching the tour. I like that Adri, specified very well and put details in her tour. What she could improve it is to make her tour more brief. It was too long, that bored a bit, although it was still very entertaining.
The last tour I saw was Fernanda's. Fernanda's tour was amazing. I really liked hers. It seems like if she put a lot of effort, she settled on the cities rather than specific hotels and airport, I really liked that, it was quite interesting. She definately could have improve her tour. It would have been better if she had more details about all the places that she visited, on the other side, she was still very precise.
Last but not least, my tour. I like my tour because I put details and I tried to specified the most I could. I put all the places I visited like when I went to Guadalajara, when I was working at the restaurant etc. Although it was brief i still like my tour. Many people say that I could have done better if my tour had been longer, but i didn't wanted to have a very long tour, because it wouldn't be the same. I like brief presentations but with a lot of details. I think i was precise, in my tour and it was interesting and entertaining.
martes, 21 de septiembre de 2010
miércoles, 1 de septiembre de 2010
JOY :)
School year just started! Yay! I'm gald im back from Summer Vacations. I had one of the best vacations ever. I did many fun and different things from other years. An amazing thing was that I learned to become a much better person, and to get to know more people. This summer was my sweet fifteen party. I had a wonderful time. All of my friends were there, wishing me happy birthday, which made me feel very special. Everything at my party was perfect for me, all of my friends had fun. A week after my party, my mom decided to make a trip to USA. We visited some family in L.A and San Diego, California. I did shopping and many interesting things while I was there. A good thing was that I got out of the same routine. When I arrived back to PV, I spent most of my vacations working at my Dad's restaurant... It wasn't that boring, because my sister was with me and we both spent some quality time together. This were the things I just did!
One thing I would like to do for myself, its probably have a rest. In my opinion I worked so hard this summer at my Dad's restaurant. I worked in the Morning and also in the afternoon. I ended exhausted every day, but I felt happy because I was helping my Dad with the business. Probably I deserve some vacations right? Maybe going into a SPA or something like that LOL.
Another thing I'll like to do for myself is.. spend more time with my pals. This summer I think I just got like to chances to spent time with them. I like to hang out with them after school and stuff. I really deserve that. Also I think I deserve more communication with my family. Spent time with them, and share important memories. These are the things I'll like to do for myself.
A part of me that makes me very special is... Mmm.. I probably think that, the way I am. I think I am very different from other people in my school. I have attitudes that make me unique. I consider myself a strong person. I don't go down that easily. I always try to face any problem I'm having, because I don't want to be afraid of no one. Another thing that makes me a special person, is that I'm always there to help others with any kind of problem they might have. Always I try to give my pals advices to make them feel better in very tough moments. When they always need my help, I'm always there trying to get a smile out of their faces.
For me that's absolutely a very unique and special thing about me. I consider myself a lucky girl whose dreams are really coming true. Maybe sometimes people might think i'm a bit agressive, but that's the way i'm, I like to fight for what I want, and I don't want to surrender. These are the things that make me special.
One thing I would like to do for myself, its probably have a rest. In my opinion I worked so hard this summer at my Dad's restaurant. I worked in the Morning and also in the afternoon. I ended exhausted every day, but I felt happy because I was helping my Dad with the business. Probably I deserve some vacations right? Maybe going into a SPA or something like that LOL.
Another thing I'll like to do for myself is.. spend more time with my pals. This summer I think I just got like to chances to spent time with them. I like to hang out with them after school and stuff. I really deserve that. Also I think I deserve more communication with my family. Spent time with them, and share important memories. These are the things I'll like to do for myself.
A part of me that makes me very special is... Mmm.. I probably think that, the way I am. I think I am very different from other people in my school. I have attitudes that make me unique. I consider myself a strong person. I don't go down that easily. I always try to face any problem I'm having, because I don't want to be afraid of no one. Another thing that makes me a special person, is that I'm always there to help others with any kind of problem they might have. Always I try to give my pals advices to make them feel better in very tough moments. When they always need my help, I'm always there trying to get a smile out of their faces.
For me that's absolutely a very unique and special thing about me. I consider myself a lucky girl whose dreams are really coming true. Maybe sometimes people might think i'm a bit agressive, but that's the way i'm, I like to fight for what I want, and I don't want to surrender. These are the things that make me special.
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