The first tour I watched, was Feri's. It was very interesting and entertaining. Before I wathced her tour, she mentioned some things she did at the summer, bu when I saw the tour, I could imagine perfectly all of her summer vacation. It was pretty awesome. It was very interesting to see the places she visited. It seems like her tour, was very fun, she went to Boston. She had many places, which made the tour long but entertaining, she had many details that make the one whose watching it very fun. What Feris could have done better, is to try to make the tour, go a bit more slow. In some parts, you couldn't appreciate it well, because it was too fast.
The second tour I saw was Adri's. I really liked her tour, because she had the exact places
were she spent most of her summer. For example her house, which i know it quite well, so I could exactly know when I was watching the tour. I like that Adri, specified very well and put details in her tour. What she could improve it is to make her tour more brief. It was too long, that bored a bit, although it was still very entertaining.
The last tour I saw was Fernanda's. Fernanda's tour was amazing. I really liked hers. It seems like if she put a lot of effort, she settled on the cities rather than specific hotels and airport, I really liked that, it was quite interesting. She definately could have improve her tour. It would have been better if she had more details about all the places that she visited, on the other side, she was still very precise.
Last but not least, my tour. I like my tour because I put details and I tried to specified the most I could. I put all the places I visited like when I went to Guadalajara, when I was working at the restaurant etc. Although it was brief i still like my tour. Many people say that I could have done better if my tour had been longer, but i didn't wanted to have a very long tour, because it wouldn't be the same. I like brief presentations but with a lot of details. I think i was precise, in my tour and it was interesting and entertaining.
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